oooh…aaah

06 Jul 2014 1 Comment

by lynn__ in Uncategorized Tags: , ,

Photo of fireworks over San Jose CA 2007 by ian kluft

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Boom!
Fireworks
Cover ears
Exploding stars
Fourth

_________

The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern
with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.

1 Comment (+add yours?)

  1. Gabriella
    Jul 06, 2014 @ 09:50:39

    I had never heard of the form and am glad I have learned something. I like how your poem seems to mirror what it describes.

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