entangled etchings

Link to d’Verse Poets Pub  featuring artist Danny Gregory of Sketchbook Skool…

 

untitled drawing by Danny Gregory, used with permission

untitled drawing by Danny Gregory, used with permission

 

if i could write

the story

of us,

i’d wake up

to you next to me

every morning

and watch

you breathe

regular

and gently

trace the edge

of your angular

shoulder blade

and feel your

warmth

even before

we sleepily

embrace,

entangled…

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. mishunderstood
    Feb 12, 2015 @ 17:28:37

    “feel your warmth even before we sleepily embrace”….
    Very sweet. 🙂

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Feb 12, 2015 @ 02:45:37

    This was one of the pictures I considered.. but I could not come up with anything like this.. perfect love poem

    Reply

  3. Glenn Buttkus
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 19:06:25

    A lovely sensual romantic piece, Lynn. I looked at that image myself, but could not come up with a poetic hook. Your poem is pitch perfect. If he were to frame that image/sketch, your poem would make the perfect artistic companion.

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  4. Mary
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 17:54:47

    I love this one, Lynne! You have captured a magical intimate moment. This poem is a keeper & one to share.

    Reply

  5. Gabriella
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 17:41:16

    I really like this sketch too, Lynn, and am glad you chose it. Only one other poet did. I like the sense of intimacy we feel in your words in a very subtle way. You conjured up a beautiful moment.

    Reply

  6. Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 17:29:13

    great sense of intimacy… a better night’s sleep is had, when it’s with someone special

    Reply

  7. Grace
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 16:39:43

    A sweet entanglement ~ I love it ~

    Reply

  8. claudia
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 14:54:00

    it’s perfect to wake next to the one you love… made me feel all the warmth in your lines

    Reply

  9. Victoria C. Slotto
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 14:39:16

    I think you’ve just written a perfect Valentine’s Day poem. How wonderful.

    Reply

  10. bmiller007 (@bmiller007)
    Feb 11, 2015 @ 12:56:35

    beautifully intimate….
    the story of us…that phrase gets me every time I hear the song…

    Reply

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