Link to d’Verse Poets Pub featuring artist Danny Gregory of Sketchbook Skool…
if i could write
the story
of us,
i’d wake up
to you next to me
every morning
and watch
you breathe
regular
and gently
trace the edge
of your angular
shoulder blade
and feel your
warmth
even before
we sleepily
embrace,
entangled…
Feb 12, 2015 @ 17:28:37
“feel your warmth even before we sleepily embrace”….
Very sweet. 🙂
Feb 12, 2015 @ 02:45:37
This was one of the pictures I considered.. but I could not come up with anything like this.. perfect love poem
Feb 11, 2015 @ 19:06:25
A lovely sensual romantic piece, Lynn. I looked at that image myself, but could not come up with a poetic hook. Your poem is pitch perfect. If he were to frame that image/sketch, your poem would make the perfect artistic companion.
Feb 11, 2015 @ 17:54:47
I love this one, Lynne! You have captured a magical intimate moment. This poem is a keeper & one to share.
Feb 11, 2015 @ 17:41:16
I really like this sketch too, Lynn, and am glad you chose it. Only one other poet did. I like the sense of intimacy we feel in your words in a very subtle way. You conjured up a beautiful moment.
Feb 11, 2015 @ 17:29:13
great sense of intimacy… a better night’s sleep is had, when it’s with someone special
Feb 11, 2015 @ 16:39:43
A sweet entanglement ~ I love it ~
Feb 11, 2015 @ 14:54:00
it’s perfect to wake next to the one you love… made me feel all the warmth in your lines
Feb 11, 2015 @ 14:39:16
I think you’ve just written a perfect Valentine’s Day poem. How wonderful.
Feb 11, 2015 @ 12:56:35
beautifully intimate….
the story of us…that phrase gets me every time I hear the song…