beauty is …

 

evident in

self-sacrifice;

deny one’s

own needs

to satisfy one

who’s even

more needy.

 

go hungry to

feed a child,

feel thirsty by

sharing last

water bottle,

be humbled by

another’s honor.

 

listen to

someone’s

complaint,

ease a pain,

change a bed

or diaper for

young or old.

 

doesn’t come

naturally, but

life and love

will demand

we give up

our own ugly

selfishness,

 

if we want to

live beautiful.

 


 

Written for Mary’s poetry prompt on “beauty” at d’Verse Poets

23 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. The Course of Our Seasons's avatar The Course of Our Seasons
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 20:56:16

    Those last lines – just breathtaking. Thank you for sharing this

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  2. writerwannabe763's avatar writerwannabe763
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 20:31:36

    So beautiful Lynn with a truth that we need to live by.. Diane

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  3. ayala zarfjian (@ayalazarfjian)'s avatar ayala zarfjian (@ayalazarfjian)
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 19:25:37

    A good message

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  4. Grace's avatar Grace
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 17:30:50

    Such a beautiful and meaningful message ~ We try, don’t we ~

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  5. charliezero1.wordpress.com's avatar charliezero1.wordpress.com
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 17:09:12

    So honest…and you spoke with soul and bravery.

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  6. Linda L. Kruschke's avatar Linda Kruschke
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 16:50:04

    You’ve pointed out some very beautiful things, and the root of them all is humility and love. Peace, Linda

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  7. Mary's avatar Mary
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 16:31:38

    Excellent! Self-sacrifice is truly beautiful. You’re right – it doesn’t come naturally, but it is a wonderful thing when it happens….for those involved as well as those observing the act.

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  8. billgncs's avatar billgncs
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 16:30:42

    Yes – that is living beautifully!

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  9. Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)'s avatar Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 16:26:59

    damn right… those who are too selfish to give, then look in the mirror and admire their outer beauty are downright ugly. I pay attention not only to how people treat me, but how they treat others as well.

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  10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Mar 24, 2015 @ 16:04:14

    So much truth in this Lynn.. really a lot of truth. So easy we see the beauty in things and forget to share and help.

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