a blossoming troiku

flautist gardener
first solo: to a wild rose
fragrance of music
 

flautist gardener

symphony of pink blossoms

trilling the high notes

 

solo: to wild rose

gardener hums while pruning

bees join orchestra

 

fragrance of music

softly floating vibrato

bow to pink applause

photo by lynn

photo by lynn
 

A troika ia a Russian sleigh pulled by a trio of horses hitched abreast of each other; a troiku is  a form of one base haiku (the sleigh) pulled by three stanzas (the horses), each beginning with a line from the original.   I’m not certain I’ve done it correctly but more information can be found at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai site on this interesting form!

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille
    Jun 13, 2015 @ 09:57:45

    You did great Lynn …. nicely composed troiku. It’s great to see that the troiku begins to become more known.

    Reply

  2. magicalmysticalteacher
    Jun 11, 2015 @ 16:20:16

    The music here sings to me!

    Flower Hunter

    Reply

  3. lithium salts
    Jun 11, 2015 @ 09:13:33

    I really like the last two lines.

    Reply

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