flautist gardener
first solo: to a wild rose
fragrance of music
flautist gardener
symphony of pink blossoms
trilling the high notes
solo: to wild rose
gardener hums while pruning
bees join orchestra
fragrance of music
softly floating vibrato
bow to pink applause
A troika ia a Russian sleigh pulled by a trio of horses hitched abreast of each other; a troiku is a form of one base haiku (the sleigh) pulled by three stanzas (the horses), each beginning with a line from the original. I’m not certain I’ve done it correctly but more information can be found at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai site on this interesting form!
Jun 13, 2015 @ 09:57:45
You did great Lynn …. nicely composed troiku. It’s great to see that the troiku begins to become more known.
Jun 13, 2015 @ 10:23:46
Thank you, Chèvre…it is an interesting form!
Jun 11, 2015 @ 16:20:16
The music here sings to me!
Flower Hunter
Jun 11, 2015 @ 21:55:57
Thanks for leaving a footprint here, flower hunter 🙂
Jun 11, 2015 @ 09:13:33
I really like the last two lines.
Jun 11, 2015 @ 09:15:30
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