who’s the fairest of them all?

this

smoke

and mirrors

times won’t tell

jenner needs jesus

gorgeous man/woman

surgery cannot fix a soul

remember michael jackson?

courageous or sadly confused

 grown children wander fatherless

rain on / rein in transgender parade

society on a thrilling roller coaster drop

rain on / rein in transgender parade

grown children wander fatherless

courageous or sadly confused

remember michael jackson?

surgery cannot fix a soul

gorgeous woman/man

jenner needs jesus

times won’t tell

mirrors and

smoke

this

Written in palindrome (mirror poem) form.  Sample more at D’verse Poets Pub

16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mish's avatar mishunderstood
    Jun 15, 2015 @ 14:06:10

    Love the shape your poem, creating a visual representation of the palindrome. Regarding the subject….it is his/her life and only God’s to judge. I would be ashamed to work for the media these days.

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  2. Kathy Reed's avatar Kathy Reed
    Jun 15, 2015 @ 01:01:50

    Excellent use of the form and I like the gentle way you handled the subject matter. ” There, but for the grace of God, go I”

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  3. Candace's avatar Candy
    Jun 14, 2015 @ 14:01:29

    Love how the shape fits the form.

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-Wade's avatar Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)
    Jun 12, 2015 @ 18:27:34

    I agree with everyone else – excellent example of palindrome, nice that it’s a shape poem too, and good on you for expressing your views so eloquently and gently … even while I too refuse to judge others for such choices, but rather support them. I am only thankful never to have experienced the profound sense of disorientation which must underlie such drastic measures. I think it is fair to note that your poem, while expounding a particular view, does not strike me as judgmental but compassionate towards the person(s) concerned.

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  5. writerwannabe763's avatar writerwannabe763
    Jun 12, 2015 @ 14:39:01

    Your poem is amazingly done… and whether or not the subject is controversial it is your thoughts on it. While I will not judge anyone as no sin is greater than another, I do have my thoughts also; that the more this is in the media spotlight, it can confuse younger people that are ‘searching for self’…. and wondering if this is their path to travel also… or are they simply confused at they move from child or teen to adult as most of us were…. Diane

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