pure amber ambiance

What I learned at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai (from Jane Reichhold):  In Japanese, a traditional “dodoitsu” is composed of four phrases in 7-7-7-5 sound units. These were sung to accompaniment of a shamisen  (banjo-like instrument with three strings). The subject matter was either love or humor.


I added rhyme because it’s our anniversary 🙂


honeysuckle image from dreams time

honey bee my honey dew

on our honeysuckle vine

soften me and sweeten you

pleasure’s yours and mine

2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. tonyasmithauthor
    Aug 31, 2015 @ 11:58:16

    Very nice Lynn!


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