winter magic

Having fun with poetics prompt at dVerse poets today…join in!


 

first big snow of the season,

school buses absent on the road

it’s late morning and time

to break out decorations

from the dust in frigid attic.

 

after i rearrange mysterious closet

clutter on deep stairway

up to attic, my son unlatches

strange little door at top,

hunches over to squeeze inside.

 

he mumbles something about mice

which i choose to ignore and

wait for him to reappear

with the first box of

green garland, tinsel, and shiny balls.

 

the long Christmas tree box comes

out first with a squeaky –  Got it, mom?

and holding up the other end

i see two hand-sized

furry paws, matched claws.

 

i’m surprised by round ears and

beady eyes where my son’s face

belonged;  i’m ready

to exclaim shock

as i grasp box,

then find i’m balancing with my tail…

 

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31 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. januarygerry's avatar januarygerry
    Dec 03, 2015 @ 15:28:12

    I looked again with a a start ,,,and was startled! Very good!

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  2. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr
    Dec 02, 2015 @ 10:30:11

    I! SO! LOVED! THIS!

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  3. Debi Swim's avatar Debi Swim
    Dec 02, 2015 @ 10:15:35

    Lovely… if I have to change, let it be a mouse.

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  4. MarinaSofia's avatar MarinaSofia
    Dec 02, 2015 @ 01:08:29

    Aw, shucks, you are such a natural at this! Just loved this fun (yet disturbing) story.

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