hot news flash

 

in your recipe for spousal stew

will you

even notice i’m on a slow burn?

please turn

me over so that i will brown

(heat down)

lightly and evenly all around

i’ve begun to sweat

broiled into a fret

will you please turn the heat down?!

 


Linking to dVerse Poets where we’re invited to write an “ovillejo” or tight little bundle (of yarn), which is untangled in the final line…

 

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. vb guenther's avatar vbholmes
    Jan 17, 2016 @ 15:06:53

    Great fun–and good use of the form.

    Reply

  2. katiemiafrederick's avatar katiemiafrederick
    Jan 16, 2016 @ 16:19:02

    SMiLes..
    onLY way
    2turn down
    the heat on
    wife.. for me
    at least.. is to
    shut-up and
    write Fred..
    4her
    e-Scape..:)

    Reply

  3. Sumana Roy's avatar Sumana Roy
    Jan 16, 2016 @ 03:57:38

    hot and fun 🙂

    Reply

  4. Bryan Ens's avatar Bryan Ens
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 23:04:53

    Brilliant, and very humorous 🙂

    Reply

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