ode to a form

yes, it

requires

some skill

to write a

real quadrille;

musical, like

a trill, a thrill

to take up

your best quill

let creative

juices spill;

count each

word,

you will

keep writing

until the

quota of

cuarenta y cuatro

you fill…

then chill.

 


Chilling at the poets’ pub today, writing quadrilles on the word “spill”.

 

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Rosemary Nissen-Wade's avatar Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    Jun 19, 2016 @ 02:26:02

    I like it so much! Good to remember that the words first of all means a dance.

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  2. Josslyn Turner's avatar Josslyn Rae Turner
    Jun 16, 2016 @ 12:09:37

    A fun read! 🙂

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  3. Sabio Lantz's avatar Sabio Lantz
    Jun 16, 2016 @ 11:37:44

    playful

    Reply

  4. Dr. Diana's avatar Dr. Diana
    Jun 15, 2016 @ 02:39:56

    Hey Lynn,

    It does’t matter that how many words are their in a poem. Your poem touched my heart. I like it so much my dear Lynn! Keep writing make a smile on everyone’s face.

    ~Dr. Diana

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  5. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)'s avatar kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)
    Jun 15, 2016 @ 00:07:48

    Chuckles! Enjoyed the alliterations. !f not for the 44-word limit, you’ll be providing more thrills, lynn! Good thinking!

    Hank

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  6. Arcadia (@MissArcadia)'s avatar Arcadia (@MissArcadia)
    Jun 14, 2016 @ 19:29:34

    Love this!

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  7. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Jun 14, 2016 @ 16:16:48

    So fun and clever. Great rhyme and flow. I’m smiling.

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  8. freyathewriter's avatar freyathewriter
    Jun 14, 2016 @ 14:54:35

    Lovely – you have such skill.

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  9. sarahsouthwest's avatar sarahsouthwest
    Jun 14, 2016 @ 13:51:58

    And – chill! I love this long thin poem, like a long cool drink.

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