true blue salute

 

former navy pilot unpacks

fond memories of his days

ordered in pristine uniform,

life aboard aircraft carrier.

 

forever alert, he still scans

ocean-blue expanse of sky

beyond white-sand islands

of floating cumulous puffs.

 

reminisces one shining hour:

officer’s personal invitation

to test-flight new jet fighter,

before honorable discharge.

 

accelerate to pure freedom;

loop-de-loop clouds, swoop

between sapphire skies and

cerulean sea, defy gravitas.

 

reverie reverts, retiree points

up – “those clouds look innocent

yet pose real threat to pilots;

may harbor hail, wind shears.”

 

in worn-out lawn chair, he bird

watches as sleek indigo swallows

swiftly cruise from barn hangar

to sail into loyal-blue heavens.

 

Clouds_over_the_Atlantic_Ocean

photo: wiki commons

 


A memory my 82 yr. old father shared with me while staying at our house this summer and linking with dVerse poets OLN in response to De’s “blue” prompt.

30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)'s avatar Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)
    Aug 12, 2016 @ 03:08:45

    Oh this is such a wonderful tribute ❤️

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  2. Dr. Crystal Grimes's avatar Dr. Crystal Howe
    Aug 12, 2016 @ 01:02:47

    Surely important memories for your father, now passed on to you. I enjoyed the poem and these lines especially:
    loop-de-loop clouds, swoop
    between sapphire skies and
    cerulean sea, defy gravitas.
    -Thanks for sharing!

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  3. maria's avatar maria
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 23:08:02

    “loop-de-loop clouds, swoop
    between sapphire skies and
    cerulean sea, defy gravitas.”

    ~great imagery! I felt like flying. 😀 Your father must be proud. ❤

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  4. kanzensakura's avatar kanzensakura
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 20:29:36

    How nice to have had your father visit and to hear his stories. Of such moments eternal memories are born. And an excellent poem for “blue”. He truly is a hero.

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  5. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 19:03:38

    He reminds me of my 94 year old friend. Great memories of flight.

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  6. Arcadia (@MissArcadia)'s avatar Arcadia (@MissArcadia)
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 18:53:37

    Lovely tribute.

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  7. scotthastiepoet's avatar scotthastiepoet
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 18:08:34

    Love your tribute here, Lynn – into the loyal blue heavens – Great!

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  8. Bodhirose's avatar Bodhirose
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 17:41:53

    “Loyal blue heavens”…that’s beautiful, Lynn. You’re fortunate to be able to still hear some old stories from your father…this was a wonderful tribute to him for his service.

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  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 16:10:32

    I do love how the way how the sky can be so different for a pilot… for me it’s looking for coming rain… those clouds warning…

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  10. Victoria Young's avatar Victoria Young
    Aug 11, 2016 @ 16:04:19

    Such a beautiful memory immortalizing your loving father!

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