true blue salute

 

former navy pilot unpacks

fond memories of his days

ordered in pristine uniform,

life aboard aircraft carrier.

 

forever alert, he still scans

ocean-blue expanse of sky

beyond white-sand islands

of floating cumulous puffs.

 

reminisces one shining hour:

officer’s personal invitation

to test-flight new jet fighter,

before honorable discharge.

 

accelerate to pure freedom;

loop-de-loop clouds, swoop

between sapphire skies and

cerulean sea, defy gravitas.

 

reverie reverts, retiree points

up – “those clouds look innocent

yet pose real threat to pilots;

may harbor hail, wind shears.”

 

in worn-out lawn chair, he bird

watches as sleek indigo swallows

swiftly cruise from barn hangar

to sail into loyal-blue heavens.

 

Clouds_over_the_Atlantic_Ocean

photo: wiki commons

 


A memory my 82 yr. old father shared with me while staying at our house this summer and linking with dVerse poets OLN in response to De’s “blue” prompt.

30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Grace's avatar Grace
    Aug 17, 2016 @ 17:30:34

    I specially love this part Lynn; its filled with energy:

    accelerate to pure freedom;

    loop-de-loop clouds, swoop

    between sapphire skies and

    cerulean sea, defy gravitas.

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  2. Joyce Wyma's avatar Joyce Wyma
    Aug 16, 2016 @ 23:05:14

    I loved the visual “unpacking the memories” (can’t you just see the old white seabag?) and “forever alert” — they just never lose that! What precious memories tucked into this poem. Well captured with the lens of your pen!

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  3. Sue Anderson's avatar Sue Anderson
    Aug 13, 2016 @ 12:49:09

    It makes sense that a pilot would view the sky differently than others…the “loyal-blue” sky. Really enjoyed the paradigm of this poem.

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  4. Bryan Ens's avatar Bryan Ens
    Aug 13, 2016 @ 10:54:24

    The bit about clouds looking innocent but posing a that reminds me of my (late) uncle who told me of flying through storm clouds during his time as a WWII soldier.

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  5. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr
    Aug 12, 2016 @ 09:08:19

    A moving portrait of an aged pilot who still scans the sky, his medium………love him watching the barn swallows and dreaming of that loyal-blue heaven.

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