former navy pilot unpacks
fond memories of his days
ordered in pristine uniform,
life aboard aircraft carrier.
forever alert, he still scans
ocean-blue expanse of sky
beyond white-sand islands
of floating cumulous puffs.
reminisces one shining hour:
officer’s personal invitation
to test-flight new jet fighter,
before honorable discharge.
accelerate to pure freedom;
loop-de-loop clouds, swoop
between sapphire skies and
cerulean sea, defy gravitas.
reverie reverts, retiree points
up – “those clouds look innocent
yet pose real threat to pilots;
may harbor hail, wind shears.”
in worn-out lawn chair, he bird
watches as sleek indigo swallows
swiftly cruise from barn hangar
to sail into loyal-blue heavens.

photo: wiki commons
A memory my 82 yr. old father shared with me while staying at our house this summer and linking with dVerse poets OLN in response to De’s “blue” prompt.
Aug 17, 2016 @ 17:30:34
I specially love this part Lynn; its filled with energy:
accelerate to pure freedom;
loop-de-loop clouds, swoop
between sapphire skies and
cerulean sea, defy gravitas.
Aug 16, 2016 @ 23:05:14
I loved the visual “unpacking the memories” (can’t you just see the old white seabag?) and “forever alert” — they just never lose that! What precious memories tucked into this poem. Well captured with the lens of your pen!
Aug 17, 2016 @ 07:30:05
Your comment just made my day, thanks friend!
Aug 13, 2016 @ 12:49:09
It makes sense that a pilot would view the sky differently than others…the “loyal-blue” sky. Really enjoyed the paradigm of this poem.
Aug 13, 2016 @ 13:11:17
Thanks, Sue! Yes, they have an intimate perspective.
Aug 13, 2016 @ 10:54:24
The bit about clouds looking innocent but posing a that reminds me of my (late) uncle who told me of flying through storm clouds during his time as a WWII soldier.
Aug 13, 2016 @ 13:08:59
Soldiers face danger intrepidly…my father served in peacetime.
Aug 12, 2016 @ 09:08:19
A moving portrait of an aged pilot who still scans the sky, his medium………love him watching the barn swallows and dreaming of that loyal-blue heaven.
Aug 12, 2016 @ 09:39:35
I love that part too…thanks much for your comment, Sherry.