driftwood shadows


time drifts out with tide

gnarled remnant of bare tree

left on sunset beach


stories etched in dry bones’ grain

memories imprint wet sand



photo credit: Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. janicead
    Oct 03, 2016 @ 13:26:40

    Splendid response.


  2. Chèvrefeuille
    Sep 30, 2016 @ 11:32:12

    Very nice Lynn__ I love how you have extended the first “stanza” with that second “stanza” well done.


  3. charliezero1.wordpress.com
    Sep 27, 2016 @ 13:34:31

    You have an eye for words of creative detail. Man do I love what you wrote.

    Beautiful! 🙂


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