a fragile beauty

29 Jan 2017 6 Comments

by lynn__ in tanka, Uncategorized Tags: , , , ,

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai‘s spring retreat theme is ” fragile beauty”.

  

sky blue robin’s egg

delicate avian life

beginning of wings

flight aborted, premature

my eggshell heart softly cracks

 

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photo by lynn

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. kim881
    Jan 30, 2017 @ 01:58:43

    Stunning, Lynn! I especially love the final line:
    ‘my eggshell heart softly cracks’

    Reply

  2. kiwinana
    Jan 29, 2017 @ 12:51:05

    Beautiful, but sad.

    Reply

  3. Victoria Young
    Jan 29, 2017 @ 11:11:04

    So precious- poor thing 💧

    Reply

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