Exploring new (old) form of poetry, the ghazal, at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
symbol of peace whose spirit we know
surprised by shadow, white dove in snow
swift owl or coyote’s bloody salvo
moonlight reveals white dove, still, in snow
on pilgrim road, choose which way to go
follow the sun or white dove in snow
cemetery where winter winds blow
watchman on headstone, white dove in snow
soft, lynn, pure sign of his love to show
alights branch above, white dove in snow
Mar 15, 2017 @ 18:35:51
Beautifully done.
Mar 15, 2017 @ 20:25:27
I thank you, Janice.
Mar 14, 2017 @ 23:21:13
Chapeau!
Mar 15, 2017 @ 04:35:39
Thank you, Chèvre!
Mar 14, 2017 @ 21:49:04
Absolutely gorgeous, Lynn!
Mar 14, 2017 @ 21:52:45
Thanks, Sara, for your kind comment…it means a lot to me.