know the feeling?

 

ride inside

mean washing machine

soiled, soaped, and spun out.

 

roll into

round hay baler

tightly wound, rightly wrapped.

 

pass through

giant rotisserie oven

toasted ’til broasted, go round ’til browned.

 

lie under

road steam roller

laid flat in tar, rode on too far.

 

 

Linking with dVerse Poets where we try to convey an emotion through things…

 

25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Feb 28, 2018 @ 13:12:35

    That has been my day… I feel wiped out and tumbledried

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  2. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Feb 28, 2018 @ 08:51:05

    Wow! Sounds like you are totally wiped out! “You have been through the mill,” so to speak!

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  3. Gospel Isosceles's avatar Gospel Isosceles
    Feb 28, 2018 @ 05:22:55

    Sounds like life, for the one who does not free oneself.

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  4. petrujviljoen's avatar petrujviljoen
    Feb 28, 2018 @ 02:31:47

    I relate completely!

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  5. revolutionarymusings's avatar revolutionarymusings
    Feb 27, 2018 @ 22:29:07

    I can to relate to feeling under such pressure. Thank you for expressing yourself. Dave

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  6. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland
    Feb 27, 2018 @ 19:29:03

    I love this, Lynn. Sounds like a day of nonstop pressure.

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  7. Waltermarks's avatar Waltermarks
    Feb 27, 2018 @ 19:23:24

    Sounds like it’s been a rough day, lol! Things being combined, pressed, washed and molded into one unit. Hope the pressure has let off

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  8. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford
    Feb 27, 2018 @ 18:08:15

    I hear the chapters of life!.

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  9. Grace's avatar Grace
    Feb 27, 2018 @ 17:56:00

    Looks like you had a very busy and harried day. Time to take a break and rest!

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  10. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny
    Feb 27, 2018 @ 17:15:24

    Four concrete descriptions of rolling emotions.

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