From Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, a haiku to “revise”:
in the moonlight,
the color and scent of the wisteria
seems far away
© Yosa Buson (1716-1784)
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hear flute softly weep
pale purple tears in moonlight
dropping over wall
© lynn__
image – CDHK
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a poem in my pocket 
Mar 22, 2018 @ 05:23:09
What an awesome revision of this beautiful haiku by Buson. Well done.
Mar 22, 2018 @ 08:14:11
…I had a need to incorporate the weeping flute of earlier prompt 🙂
Mar 21, 2018 @ 20:37:30
All your lines are my favorite! Perfect.
Mar 21, 2018 @ 20:56:41
Thanks, Nan…you make me smile.
Mar 21, 2018 @ 21:14:53
I’ve reblogged.
Mar 21, 2018 @ 21:16:05
I’m honored!