castaway

Carpe Diem “Crossroads” challenge to fuse two haiku into one. 


 

Ozaki Hosai

Ozaki Hosai

on the field
where evening has died out,
my footsteps

the heart
that seeks something
I release to the sea

© Ozaki Hosai (revised by Chèvrefeuille)

 

 

fading with daylight

washed to sea by searching tide

footprints of the heart

© lynn__

 

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photo by lynn

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. purplepeninportland
    May 19, 2018 @ 19:16:08

    amazing photo!

    Reply

  2. Janice
    May 17, 2018 @ 08:39:37

    A beautiful haiku Lynn. I love the ‘searching tide’.

    Reply

  3. Chèvrefeuille
    May 16, 2018 @ 14:32:01

    The ultimate experience caught in this fusion haiku.

    Reply

  4. Vivian Zems
    May 16, 2018 @ 13:04:42

    Beautiful Lynn! Footprintso and the heart always seem to go together 😊

    Reply

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