Carpe Diem “Crossroads” challenge to fuse two haiku into one.

Ozaki Hosai
on the field
where evening has died out,
my footsteps
the heart
that seeks something
I release to the sea
© Ozaki Hosai (revised by Chèvrefeuille)
fading with daylight
washed to sea by searching tide
footprints of the heart
© lynn__

photo by lynn
May 19, 2018 @ 19:16:08
amazing photo!
May 19, 2018 @ 22:09:23
Thanks…the footprints looked raised to me so that makes it unique, I think.
May 20, 2018 @ 19:18:26
Exactly!
May 17, 2018 @ 08:39:37
A beautiful haiku Lynn. I love the ‘searching tide’.
May 16, 2018 @ 14:32:01
The ultimate experience caught in this fusion haiku.
May 16, 2018 @ 16:19:46
Thanks for introducing us to haiku masters!
May 16, 2018 @ 13:04:42
Beautiful Lynn! Footprintso and the heart always seem to go together 😊
May 16, 2018 @ 13:48:52
Thanks for your kind comments, Vivian!
May 16, 2018 @ 14:20:20
😊