CDHK weekend fusion challenge: fuse two haiku, then create troiku…
temple bells die out
the fragrant blossoms remain
a perfect evening
will we meet again
here at your flowering grave –
two white butterflies
© Basho
church bells’ somber ring
fragrance of casket flowers
butterflies wing hope
© lynn
church bell’s somber ring
ask for whom is it tolling?
time waits for no one
fragrance of casket flowers
roses, daisies, carnations
florals dress-up death
butterflies wing hope
loved by two mothers, i know
we will meet again
May 25, 2018 @ 13:34:31
Awesome troiku Lynn__
May 25, 2018 @ 14:00:09
Thank you, Chèvre…I like the new form you invented!
May 21, 2018 @ 09:36:43
Hope. Yes.
May 20, 2018 @ 05:15:15
love the visuals of your mothers – above the casket flowers
May 20, 2018 @ 06:48:23
thanks, Laura…perhaps one can say, a “good” grief when there’s hope