calligraphy serifs

Chèvre at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai challenges us to write “fusion troiku”: combine two classic haiku into one, then use for first lines of haiku series of three…


 

before the white chrysanthemum
the scissors hesitate
a moment

 

calligraphy of geese
against the sky—
the moon seals it

 

© Yosa Buson  (Tr. Robert Hass)

 

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scent of cut blossom —

moon, like white chrysanthemum,

pale against dark sky

© lynn__

 

scent of cut blossoms

wafts delicate from altar

…fresh bridal bouquet

 

moon, like a white mum,

blooms full at summer solstice;

signs written in spheres

 

pale against dark sky

—revelations’ seven seals—

groom rides on white horse

 

 

 

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Janice
    Aug 08, 2018 @ 20:26:46

    A beautiful fusion and troiku to go with it 🙂

    Reply

  2. Chèvrefeuille
    Aug 06, 2018 @ 14:47:52

    Very nicely crafted fusion-troiku Lynn__

    Reply

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