Chèvre at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai challenges us to write “fusion troiku”: combine two classic haiku into one, then use for first lines of haiku series of three…
before the white chrysanthemum
the scissors hesitate
a moment
calligraphy of geese
against the sky—
the moon seals it
© Yosa Buson (Tr. Robert Hass)
scent of cut blossom —
moon, like white chrysanthemum,
pale against dark sky
© lynn__
scent of cut blossoms
wafts delicate from altar
…fresh bridal bouquet
moon, like a white mum,
blooms full at summer solstice;
signs written in spheres
pale against dark sky
—revelations’ seven seals—
groom rides on white horse
Aug 08, 2018 @ 20:26:46
A beautiful fusion and troiku to go with it 🙂
Aug 08, 2018 @ 20:27:50
Thank you, Janice!
Aug 06, 2018 @ 14:47:52
Very nicely crafted fusion-troiku Lynn__
Aug 06, 2018 @ 18:26:09
Thanks for the inspiration…and encouragement!