soft as cashmere | a poem in my pocket

soft as cashmere

14 Aug 2018 4 Comments

by lynn__ in senryu Tags: cashmere, ears, graceful, hands, heart, music

Folk music of Kashmir, India featured at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

hypnotizing voice

exotic music sways heart

sung by graceful hands

4 Comments (+add yours?)

Chèvrefeuille
Aug 16, 2018 @ 15:18:02

You caught the emotion of the song and the singer. Nice.

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- lynn__
  Aug 16, 2018 @ 15:20:39
  
  Thank you, Chèvre!
  
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Pat: willow88switches
Aug 16, 2018 @ 14:31:43

it’s interesting you noted the hand elements, for hands are equally symbolic in conveying messages and words, so this is a wonderful aspect you’ve noted! well done!

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- lynn__
  Aug 16, 2018 @ 14:46:40
  
  Her hand movements caught my eye…thank you for your comment!
  
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