when “early” is a verb

 

when cows are mooing, hungry for hay

early me, early me, early the day

when love comes calling, sweetly we lay

early me, early me, early the day

when Spirit is whispering urge to pray

early me, early me, early the day

when open road beckons to journey away

early me, early me, early the day!

 

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny
    Oct 25, 2018 @ 15:07:58

    I like the comparison of cows, love, spirit and the open road. It is good to be early for them.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Oct 25, 2018 @ 01:51:48

    Sounds like how life can when being early is good.

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  3. revivedwriter's avatar revivedwriter
    Oct 24, 2018 @ 22:04:37

    I like this. It’s almost like a nursery rhyme.

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  4. Gina@alifelesslived's avatar Gina
    Oct 24, 2018 @ 19:01:57

    lovely use of repetition

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  5. sarahsouthwest's avatar sarahsouthwest
    Oct 24, 2018 @ 16:50:58

    I love the repetition – like a call and answer. This could be 500 years old or written today.

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  6. carolinestreetblog's avatar carolinestreetblog
    Oct 24, 2018 @ 09:17:51

    Very nice!

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