Carpe Diem‘s “tan renga” challenge…add 2 line response to original haiku.
the cold wintry wind
is blowing so hard that
the sun sinks into the ocean
© Soseki
today, sun admits defeat
tomorrow, will rise stronger
© lynn__
image from pinterest
wind vs. sun
09 Feb 2019 Leave a comment
in tan renga Tags: cold, ocean, sun, wind, wintry
a poem in my pocket 
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