wind vs. sun

09 Feb 2019 Leave a comment

by lynn__ in tan renga Tags: , , , ,

Carpe Diem‘s “tan renga” challenge…add 2 line response to original haiku.

 

the cold wintry wind
is blowing so hard that
the sun sinks into the ocean

© Soseki

today, sun admits defeat
tomorrow, will rise stronger

© lynn__

sundown

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