ruins

 

ancient stone pillars

“how impressive!” people say

snow covers rubble

© lynn__

 

inspired by this classic haiku:

“An ancient road,” they say
How charming
Though beneath this snow.

© Yosa Buson

 


Joining Carpe Diem Haiku Kai‘s 7th anniversary celebration!

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. kim881's avatar kim881
    Oct 07, 2019 @ 10:35:03

    Insightful and down-to-earth, Lynn!

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  2. Cara Hartley's avatar Cara Hartley
    Oct 06, 2019 @ 16:54:42

    The world wags on, caring nothing for the opinions of people. Beautifully written Senryu!
    ~Cie~

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