just peelings

24 Feb 2020 6 Comments

by lynn__ in quadrille Tags: , , , , ,

 

peelings, nothing more than peelings
trying to remember apple peelings of life
teardrops rolling down on my cheeks
trying to forget onion peelings in sink…

woo-oo, peel potato in my hands
slip like never lost u
slide like never leave u
again in garden…

 

Screen Shot 2020-02-24 at 5.43.14 PM

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My apologies to songwriter Morris Albert who wrote 1975 hit, “Feelings”.  I’m linking this to dVerse quadrille prompt on “peelings”  🙂

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mish
    Feb 26, 2020 @ 17:37:18

    Such an interesting quadrille…a lot of emotions being peeled away.

    Reply

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Feb 25, 2020 @ 14:31:27

    I peel good a James Brown sang.

    Reply

  3. gillena cox
    Feb 24, 2020 @ 22:37:08

    This is a cute whimsical quadrille, luv the word play. Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    Much✏love

    Reply

  4. Frank Hubeny
    Feb 24, 2020 @ 20:13:34

    I like the slipping and sliding in the second part.

    Reply

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