2020 has not aged well

A documentary poem linked to dVerse poetics

Eighty-six years young,

energetic octogenarian

on outing with daughter

and husband, who can

vouch as eye-witnesses,

was seen walking around

the stockyards, up and

down stairs holding rails,

shared smoked turkey legs,

even stayed for evening

rodeo past usual bedtime.

 

 

Months later, following

corona-virus outbreak,

an old man walks out of

his assisted living home,

slips off curb behind his

parked car, recovers, sells

said vehicle, exchanges

for walker to roam halls

takes two naps daily,

even loses weight from

not eating well alone,

zoom marks 87th year.

 

 

 

 

36 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Debi's avatar poetrybydebi
    Nov 12, 2020 @ 14:35:55

    I’m so sorry. That was a quick set back. Hard for him and his family.

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  2. Dora's avatar Dora
    Nov 12, 2020 @ 12:34:11

    All the beautifully accrued imagery of health and vigor, reduced to what’s left after sickness, the exchange of car to walker, activity for naps, makes this that much more moving and powerful. The wealth of detail, Lynn, drives the sad reality home.

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  3. lillian's avatar lillian
    Nov 12, 2020 @ 12:17:04

    Ageing is so very difficult for so many. And this Covid has made it all the more so. I pray he is loved by those around him.

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  4. Grace's avatar Grace
    Nov 11, 2020 @ 19:07:45

    How sad for him. I feel for the aged community who must isolate themselves from their family due the pandemic. I am sure the isolation and loneliness are hard to bear.

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  5. robtkistner's avatar robtkistner
    Nov 11, 2020 @ 17:22:59

    I feel you Lynn. I am blessed to be on the ground floor with my wife, while my son, daughter-in-law, and grandson are on the second floor. I do not know how I would have endured this madness so far without them near.

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    • lynn__'s avatar lynn__
      Nov 11, 2020 @ 17:36:54

      Wonderful to have family close by! We’ve been able to see all of our sons, wives, and grands during the pandemic but Dad and my brother’s family are 600 miles away.

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  6. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo
    Nov 11, 2020 @ 16:02:35

    It’s a sad time for those in and with relatives in assisted living. I feel for both of you. (K)

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  7. Linda Lee Lyberg's avatar Linda Lee Lyberg
    Nov 11, 2020 @ 15:34:46

    My heart goes out to you and your father- bless you both.

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  8. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Nov 11, 2020 @ 15:29:45

    Wow “If the right one doesn’t get you the left one will…” Some people are like the energizer bunny… Great poem Lynn!

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