war hero

tactically,
we assumed
she would die young,
like her sister and her son
who lost battles to asthma

but Aunt Jeanette held her
fight to breathe for 81 years
till leukemia attacked.

Her final orders: “You
better go now before
you make me cry!”

 

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De at dVerse poets pub invites us to write quadrilles (44 words) on the theme: GO

37 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith
    Feb 25, 2021 @ 09:20:14

    So moving, Lynn. She’s sounds like a strong, wise, funny woman, and someone you cherished. I’m sorry for your loss.

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  2. Dora's avatar Dora
    Feb 24, 2021 @ 21:08:34

    She lived strong and even in her last moments, wanted that strength to be passed on to you, not her parting tears!. She sounds like quite a lady.

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  3. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi
    Feb 23, 2021 @ 16:11:42

    This is so moving, Lynn! A most beautiful tribute to a lady who gives strength a brand new definition 🙂

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  4. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford
    Feb 23, 2021 @ 14:53:21

    I life my glass to Aunt Jeanette!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Feb 23, 2021 @ 14:22:52

    Sounds like she was a warrior all the way to the end.

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