i painted our basement
a lucious “oyster shoal”
such neutral hue embued
between cloud and coal
idyllic muted color match
to old grey mare’s fair foal
if i fall into a swoon, know
the fumes have taken toll
as paint chip covers wall
in opalescent oyster shoal!
Inspired by Sarah’s “colours” prompt at dVerse which fit with my latest home project.
Mar 24, 2022 @ 11:42:13
Such a wonderful immersion of colour in this one, Lynn! ❤️❤️
Mar 24, 2022 @ 14:34:56
Glad you like it, Sanaa!
Mar 24, 2022 @ 04:37:55
I love all of these colours, and the rhyme scheme you have employed!
Mar 24, 2022 @ 14:35:50
Thanks for enjoying the rhymes…I did 🙂
Mar 23, 2022 @ 17:12:19
That is a lovely color. Good luck with that house project.
Mar 23, 2022 @ 18:41:25
Thanks, Grace…we bought a house and hope to move this summer 🙂
Mar 23, 2022 @ 17:12:11
Very enjoyable Lynn!
Mar 23, 2022 @ 18:41:53
Thanks, Carol 🙂
Mar 23, 2022 @ 14:06:42
The rhythm and rhyme scheme are great here – they give a poem that just lifts off the page. I can picture the colour – hope the DIY is going well!
Mar 23, 2022 @ 16:45:39
Thank you very much, Sarah!
Mar 23, 2022 @ 12:33:48
Lynn, I can tell you had a lot of fun with this one. Thanks for the smile 🙂
Mar 23, 2022 @ 13:12:21
My pleasure…yes!