marine life in iowa

i painted our basement
a lucious “oyster shoal”
such neutral hue embued
between cloud and coal
idyllic muted color match
to old grey mare’s fair foal
if i fall into a swoon, know
the fumes have taken toll
as paint chip covers wall
in opalescent oyster shoal!

Inspired by Sarah’s “colours” prompt at dVerse which fit with my latest home project.

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi
    Mar 24, 2022 @ 11:42:13

    Such a wonderful immersion of colour in this one, Lynn! ❤️❤️

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  2. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid
    Mar 24, 2022 @ 04:37:55

    I love all of these colours, and the rhyme scheme you have employed!

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  3. Grace's avatar Grace
    Mar 23, 2022 @ 17:12:19

    That is a lovely color. Good luck with that house project.

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  4. ccongalton2014's avatar Carol Congalton
    Mar 23, 2022 @ 17:12:11

    Very enjoyable Lynn!

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  5. sarahsouthwest's avatar sarahsouthwest
    Mar 23, 2022 @ 14:06:42

    The rhythm and rhyme scheme are great here – they give a poem that just lifts off the page. I can picture the colour – hope the DIY is going well!

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  6. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli
    Mar 23, 2022 @ 12:33:48

    Lynn, I can tell you had a lot of fun with this one. Thanks for the smile 🙂

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