Summer Day, Brighton Beach by Edward Henry Potthast

seaside holiday

playing cat-and-mouse with surf

transport sand home


A senryu for dVerse poets where Merril hosts ekphrastic poetry.

11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Grace
    Jun 08, 2022 @ 19:36:22

    Well I got some sands with me at home, smiles.


  2. SelmaMartin
    Jun 08, 2022 @ 19:23:36

    That’s it! Lovely, Lynn 👏


  3. Glenn A. Buttkus
    Jun 08, 2022 @ 15:03:38

    Very witty and a bit wistful. My Haibun had a haiku at the end as well.


  4. Laura Bloomsbury
    Jun 08, 2022 @ 14:40:44

    that last line caught me off guard – so witty!


  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jun 08, 2022 @ 14:36:44

    Sand coming home… i think a mother would care 🙂


  6. merrildsmith
    Jun 08, 2022 @ 06:53:38

    Oh you captured it all perfectly in this haiku! I’m impressed!


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