along bank’s river
where snows fall twice
there flows fish ice
beneath the candling sky
of ceiling wax
a waxing seal
barks swimmingly in whalousy,
“’tis otterly ridiculous-ness, yes?”
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Mar 27, 2023 @ 13:32:33
Fantastic wordplay, Lynn! You had me chuckling.
Mar 27, 2023 @ 13:51:10
thanks 🙂
Mar 25, 2023 @ 13:40:26
Clever and sassy like the seal. Loved the word play!
Mar 25, 2023 @ 18:30:09
i thank ya, Dora!
Mar 25, 2023 @ 10:05:44
My my Lynn No WHere Near the End
It is So true Who is More Brilliant than
A Child Who Dances Without Lessons
With A Non-Sense Song That only Brings
Joy As A Free Dance
Does to Children’s
Eyes All Lit Up
Without Grasping
The World And Telling
God What God Must Do With SMiLes
iNDeeD Secret in Plain Sight Seeing the
World in the Wonder And Awe of a Child Free
Only Room to Create A New Dance And Song in Play
For
Real
With SMiLes
As Play Naturally
Slays Fear And With
No Fear Love Springs More
From LoVE iN Peace God Yes
Naturally Free to Give Share
Care Heal With Most Respect
And Least Harm to Other Children
in Play Creating THeir Own Dances And Songs
Free iN JoY oF LiGHT iNHaLinG Peace ExhalinG LoVE
For Real
Inherent
The Gift
of Within
This Heaven
For Real Ours
The Child EYeS Reborn to See
And Truly Breathe Naked Enough Whole Complete..:)
Mar 25, 2023 @ 10:11:36
Jesus himself recognized the humble faith of a childlike spirit…and the freedom it gives! Thanks for your playful response and for sharing your free spirit here and with the world, my friend Fred!!
Mar 25, 2023 @ 10:20:15
SMiles Dear Lynn
And Then The
Child Is Scolded
In Church With
Quiet Hands
And Feet At
School And
Work Until
There
Is No Free
God Play
HoMe
To Slay
Fear For
Love To
Flourish For
Heaven i Believe
In The Teachings Of
Jesus about
The Child’s
EYeS And
The Heaven
Within Perhaps
One Day The “World”
Will Not
Take It
Away
i Shall
Not Wait
Left Behind…
Thanks For Your
Hospitality Dear FRiEnD
Lynn
With SMiles🏝☺️
Mar 24, 2023 @ 05:04:15
So much fun, Lynn! This made me smile, too.
Mar 24, 2023 @ 17:06:26
Your comment makes me smile, Merril 🙂
Mar 25, 2023 @ 08:26:50
😊
Mar 24, 2023 @ 04:19:42
So good, Lynn. Made me smile. Thanks.
Mar 24, 2023 @ 17:05:40
Happy to make you smile, Selma!
Mar 24, 2023 @ 04:17:31
Fantabulous!
Mar 24, 2023 @ 17:04:46
Aww…thanks!
Mar 24, 2023 @ 00:44:02
Chuckling away 😎love this.
Mar 24, 2023 @ 17:04:22
Thanks for stopping by, Yassy 🙂
Mar 23, 2023 @ 18:37:11
That last line made me smile Lynn. Love the candling sky!
Mar 23, 2023 @ 20:59:45
I’m glad you liked it, Grace 🙂