44-word quadrille for dVerse poets where De features the word “zoom” 🙂


he runs into room

zim, zam, zoomscreen-shot-2023-03-31-at-5.20.29-pm

says, “look at me!”

brrrr, whirr, whee

“see, i can go fast”

bing, bang, blast

climbs on a chair

jumps in the air

rolls on the ground

with grunting sound

(gramma thinks may

be naptime soon?)


18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. janicead
    Apr 09, 2023 @ 17:14:46

    It is naptime for the grandson or you or both!


  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Apr 04, 2023 @ 14:12:24

    Right before bedtime the energy is the highest.


  3. Ron.
    Apr 04, 2023 @ 13:26:13

    Here; just slip one of these into his afternoon snack and, well….z-z-z-z-z-z


  4. Gillena Cox
    Apr 04, 2023 @ 05:32:27

    Luv the supporting sounds. Takes us there, spot on, into the scene.

    Thanks for dropping by to read mine



  5. kim881
    Apr 04, 2023 @ 02:03:38

    I’m not long back from visiting my daughter and grandsons, and this is so familiar, Lynn! Lots of running and onomatopoeia!


  6. M Jay Dixit
    Apr 03, 2023 @ 20:29:49

    full of sounds!!


  7. Becoming His Tapestry
    Apr 03, 2023 @ 19:04:56

    Beautiful 🤩


  8. rothpoetry
    Apr 03, 2023 @ 18:57:23

    Ha ha… you know the apple does not fall far from the tree! I love it. Looks like you got your hands full with this one!! :>)


  9. chrisbkm
    Apr 03, 2023 @ 18:06:23

    Love it!


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