falling for fall

A Villonnet is a hybrid of the Villanelle and the Sonnet. It has the Iambic Pentameter of both, but holds the four-stanza/line structure of the sonnet, while utilizing the two-line rhyme nature of the villanelle. The final stanza replaces the sonnet couplet with a typical villanelle tercet.  Linking this villonnet to Grace’s prompt at dVerse Poets pub. I was NOT going to write about fall, but here it is…

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i sit on deck to soak in warm sunshine
this end of summer’s glow suits my skin fine
fat cats watch scene from shade and lounge around
piped wind chimes’ gentle song is only sound

forgotten apple falls from top of tree
while butterflies migrate, bees cap honey
red leaves whirl past as if in joyful dance
a celebration of autumn’s last chance

ripe orange pumpkins lie hidden in field
as drying crops will soon their harvest yield
pheasants and deer will feast upon the corn
bred cows will glean before blizzards are born

today, september stays my favorite month
until the wind turns cold out of the north
then i will dream with birds of drifting south

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NOTE: Line 1 is to be repeated as lines 8 and 13, and line 4 is repeated as lines 12 and 15. I neglected to repeat any lines, not a true villonnet…may have to rework sometime!

photo by lynn__

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Helen's avatar Helen
    Sep 23, 2024 @ 12:30:52

    September is also my favorite month, my birth month. If you don’t mind, I am going to pull up a chair next to you ~~ revel in the Autumn you describe.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 22, 2024 @ 06:25:45

    September at its best… some warmth and nature preparing for winter.

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  3. kim881's avatar kim881
    Sep 22, 2024 @ 03:07:37

    It’s like I’m sitting on the deck with you, Lynn. I love the fat cats, the fallen apple, and the wind chimes – my husband gave me musician-tuned wind chimes for my birthday, which play wonderful tunes in the breeze. Lovely use of colour, too.

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Sep 21, 2024 @ 17:56:17

    Beautifully done, Lynn!

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