bang on!

try (fitfully)
to sleep; i’m
depleted from
preparations:
hop, shop, clean,
bake, make room
in “mama’s inn
for (too late… or
too early?) arrival
so….. please (!)
don’t bang that
door (again) !!

yet, come & go,
and also know
you’re more
cherished
than sleep
to me .


My 44-word quadrille for dVerse as we end poetic year with a bang!

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland
    Dec 12, 2024 @ 20:14:02

    It can be hectic, but if it is rewarding in the end, it is worth it.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Dec 10, 2024 @ 10:34:58

    A lot of work and noise but there are rewards too.

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Dec 10, 2024 @ 05:15:59

    Wow luv this. Happy you dropped by my blog

    Much❤️💚love

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  4. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli
    Dec 09, 2024 @ 22:44:21

    Lynn, your poem gave me the warm fuzzies. You’re right, it’s mayhem, but it’s worth it.

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  5. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Dec 09, 2024 @ 21:27:05

    Lovely! That’s a mother’s heart!❤️
    Take it easy and enjoy your time with them. Merry Christmas in advance, Lynn.

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  6. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Dec 09, 2024 @ 18:33:48

    That is a very sweet ending, Lynn. You are right!

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  7. Grace's avatar Grace
    Dec 09, 2024 @ 18:31:33

    Those preparations can drain me too. Enjoy the rest and lock the door!

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