A quadrille (44 words) linked to dVerse poets where Kim invites us to walk quietly.
to come alongside
lone hurting person in
whatever hard situation
they find themselves.
one who quietly listens
attentive, undistracted
who accepts, validates
with humble posture.
to sit, stand, wait, walk
with fellow pilgrim on
a difficult path in life
hold up, hold on, hope!
May 27, 2025 @ 06:11:52
How wonderful to have someone when one is hurting.
May 23, 2025 @ 19:32:26
Holding on to hope is the only way to survive. Great poem, Lynn!
May 23, 2025 @ 19:38:05
Thank you, Sara!
May 23, 2025 @ 10:29:33
Lynn, your phrase “to sit, stand, wait, walk / with fellow pilgrim” lingers with me—it feels like a quiet benediction.
There’s such strength in the gentleness of this ministry.
~David
May 23, 2025 @ 19:40:55
I appreciate your comment, David.
May 23, 2025 @ 22:19:15
🤗
May 21, 2025 @ 01:01:46
Yes, Lynn, the presence of another human being when we need it has healing properties. The coupling of ‘lone’ and ‘hurting’ emphasises that. Quiet listening is like a medicine. I love the ‘hope!’ at the end of your quiet quadrille.
May 21, 2025 @ 08:46:48
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Kim…and thanks for the prompt!
May 21, 2025 @ 12:16:10
My pleasure, Lynn!
May 20, 2025 @ 21:11:49
Always hold onto hope.
May 20, 2025 @ 14:52:29
There are so many that would need help….
May 20, 2025 @ 17:12:17
yes…everyone should help someone!
May 20, 2025 @ 14:30:25
we all need such a friend 🙂
May 20, 2025 @ 14:37:26
Yes, thanks, Ren 🙂