baking from memory

The day Dad tries to
burn our house down
with us in it, my excited
brother is yelling, “Fire!”
as I run downstairs into
cloud of smoke billowing
from open oven door
where Dad’s cream puffs
combust, ashes to ashes,
because he doubled butter.

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Lisa hosts “puff” quadrilles (44 words) at dVerse poets pub

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Helen's avatar Helen
    Jul 16, 2026 @ 10:10:46

    OMG, Lyn .. this is so funny! My mother was an expert in the art of making creme puffs .. many afternoons after school my sisters and I would find them waiting for us! I know, I know .. lucky us. Thanks so much for leaving me a comment.

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  2. anotherkatewilson's avatar anotherkatewilson
    Jul 16, 2026 @ 00:09:49

    A comedien said “men will cook if danger is involved”, but I wouldn’t have thought that included cream puffs!

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  3. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li
    Jul 15, 2026 @ 18:05:39

    A memory not soon forgotten I bet. I’m glad your mom was on her toes.

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  4. Dawn Minott's avatar Dawn Minott
    Jul 15, 2026 @ 15:24:06

    Oh no … he didn’t. Poor dad 😢

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  5. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith
    Jul 15, 2026 @ 11:58:36

    Oh no! I’m glad no one was hurt!

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  6. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander
    Jul 15, 2026 @ 10:54:02

    Ommigosh!

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  7. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Jul 15, 2026 @ 09:50:44

    Oh no!

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    • lynn__'s avatar lynn__
      Jul 15, 2026 @ 09:57:07

      It was a dramatic moment but my mother put the fire out with extinguisher, turned on fans, and opened both front and back doors to let out the smoke. Dad had left them to bake while he ran to corner grocery store (?!) We’ve all laughed about it later 😀

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