life breath

prayer is not a grocery list
or a letter to santa claus
it’s not a chore to check off
or an assignment to turn in.

prayer is neither bragging
nor demanding; neither
posturing nor performing;
but may involve wrestling.

prayer is love relationship;
listening and responding as
we quiet our heart to hear his,
he breathes life into us again.

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Bjorn hosts MTB with dVerse poets where we may experiment with poetic tool of negation…or not.

19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Aug 11, 2026 @ 04:21:36

    Absolutely!!!

    much love

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  2. jaerose37's avatar jaerose37
    Aug 09, 2026 @ 00:22:15

    I love your reflections – beautifully related – Jae

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  3. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 22:00:03

    Praying is like poetry ❤

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  4. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 19:40:45

    Lovely, Lynn!

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 18:16:18

    Very well written, Lynn. I agree with your negativa! I liked the nod to wrestling with God!

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  6. erbiage's avatar erbiage
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 12:03:14

    well penned, great use of the ‘form’. i think it’s really necessary to speak of what it isn’t, as so many don’t seem to understand what it is, and what it is for. every moment can be a prayer

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  7. artsandletters9's avatar artsandletters9
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 11:50:19

    Just beautiful… Amen.

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 07:15:24

    Praying is too often a performance for me… true prayers are probably done in solitude.

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  9. wrestlingwordblog's avatar wrestlingwordblog
    Aug 07, 2026 @ 06:54:03

    “but may involve wrestling” ❤️

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  10. bruce@ssa's avatar bruce@ssa
    Aug 06, 2026 @ 22:19:41

    Jesus was never too busy to pray. We should adopt the same attitude. Prayer can involve wrestling…most definitely.😇

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