midnight madness

Response to Mary’s d’Verse poetics (choose a quote, write a poem)   photo: Brainy Quotes

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lacking sleep my mind felt bleary

blinking smoke my eyes grew teary

my date’s drinking made me leery

“Ed,” I said in tone too cheery,

“give your keys to Raven, dearie.”

 

He shook his head and said, “Lenore,

pleeezsh let me open your car door.

That bird’s slow driving is a bore.”

He stepped the pedal to the floor;

we crashed…I’m gone, forevermore.

 

 

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Victoria C. Slotto
    May 22, 2014 @ 18:02:55

    Dang clever take, Ms. Poe. I’d be leery, too, dearie.

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  2. Sumana Roy
    May 22, 2014 @ 12:22:56

    thanks for the smile… 😀

    Reply

  3. billgncs
    May 22, 2014 @ 02:35:46

    Nice – I could just imagine Basil Rathbone reading it!

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  4. bmiller007 (@bmiller007)
    May 21, 2014 @ 23:21:08

    ha. thanks for the chuckle

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    May 21, 2014 @ 18:15:48

    Ha .. I think that the bird should always be the dedicated driver… 🙂

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  6. Gabriella
    May 21, 2014 @ 16:29:18

    Excellent! You made me smile. Great use of the rhymes.

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  7. Mary
    May 21, 2014 @ 13:24:14

    LOL, what a delightful and clever read! Love your sense of humor here!

    Reply

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