garden’s yellow star
shining between dawn and dusk
i claim her melons
My response to CDHK prompt to “revise” master haiku 🙂
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a poem in my pocket 
Mar 04, 2017 @ 18:23:17
Wonderful take!
Mar 04, 2017 @ 19:27:32
Thanks 🙂
Jun 18, 2014 @ 08:04:59
such a nice thought… love those blooms ..
Jun 17, 2014 @ 11:22:31
Super charming. k.
Jun 14, 2014 @ 18:58:25
ah… we’re a good month away from melon blooms… nice thoughts
Jun 14, 2014 @ 18:07:50
Nicely written Lynn Diane … the flowers of the melon are wonderful but they bloom so short …