apology to Basho

 

garden’s yellow star

shining between dawn and dusk

i claim her melons

 

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My response to CDHK prompt to “revise” master haiku 🙂

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. janicead
    Mar 04, 2017 @ 18:23:17

    Wonderful take!

    Reply

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jun 18, 2014 @ 08:04:59

    such a nice thought… love those blooms ..

    Reply

  3. ManicDdaily
    Jun 17, 2014 @ 11:22:31

    Super charming. k.

    Reply

  4. wolfsrosebud
    Jun 14, 2014 @ 18:58:25

    ah… we’re a good month away from melon blooms… nice thoughts

    Reply

  5. Chèvrefeuille
    Jun 14, 2014 @ 18:07:50

    Nicely written Lynn Diane … the flowers of the melon are wonderful but they bloom so short …

    Reply

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