Linking to: Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge
sunset photo by Oliana
power-driven fowl
in rays of a setting sun
flies home
– © Oliana
return flight to nesting ground
jet-bird song follows contrail.
– lynn
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a poem in my pocket 
Oct 13, 2014 @ 13:57:45
After a long journey, a flight that lasts for a day or something it’s good to be home again … marvelous continuation of this Tan Renga.
Oct 13, 2014 @ 14:19:11
It did surprise me how we can fit even a mechanical bird into a nice haiku/tan renga…thanks for posting the prompt, Chèvre!
Oct 13, 2014 @ 15:17:20
My pleasure Lynn
Oct 12, 2014 @ 22:19:13
after a power driven day its nice to have the quiet nest to return to. Nice coupling in this tan renga
Oct 13, 2014 @ 14:16:39
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment 🙂
Oct 12, 2014 @ 12:27:00
I read a news article about contrails… I was surprised to learn that some folks were still so unsure as to what they were. There were an awful lot of them crossing the sky but really it wasn’t anything ‘alien’. I really don’t live in ‘the sticks’ But to make such a big thing about them that it required space in the newspaper – well it must have been a very slow news day.
Thanks for your visit.
Oct 12, 2014 @ 13:36:06
Yes, small town newspapers may seem “quaint” but the articles have a more positive spin than big city news, don’t you think? Thanks for commenting!
Oct 12, 2014 @ 13:38:47
Our ‘paper’ is quite bias actually. Still to much negativism. And not enough truth. Reporting isn’t what it used to be.
Oct 12, 2014 @ 09:49:17
I love the sound of that `nesting ground’
Oct 12, 2014 @ 13:32:02
Thanks 🙂 Your “hokku” and photo are inspiring!