abandoned property

3d_landscape cottage


this old house ain’t home

fly away to paradise

doorway to real life


Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai today.

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 27, 2015 @ 07:45:04

    That doorway, can we ever find it.


  2. Victoria C. Slotto
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 13:49:20

    I see so many abandoned structures on our drive between Reno and Palm Desert and they always beg to be photographed and written about…sadly, I’m always in too much of a hurry to “get there.” Nice metaphor you’ve developed here, Lynn.


  3. Bastet
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 10:32:55

    This is an interesting take on the image … I’d say, yes, the house is abandoned … and no home.


  4. magicalmysticalteacher
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 09:51:58

    Real life is so different from our imaginations, isn’t it?



  5. Hamish 'Managua' Gunn
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 06:34:55

    Very interesting haiku – liked a lot


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