abandoned property

3d_landscape cottage

 

this old house ain’t home

fly away to paradise

doorway to real life

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Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai today.

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 27, 2015 @ 07:45:04

    That doorway, can we ever find it.

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  2. Victoria C. Slotto
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 13:49:20

    I see so many abandoned structures on our drive between Reno and Palm Desert and they always beg to be photographed and written about…sadly, I’m always in too much of a hurry to “get there.” Nice metaphor you’ve developed here, Lynn.

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  3. Bastet
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 10:32:55

    This is an interesting take on the image … I’d say, yes, the house is abandoned … and no home.

    Reply

  4. magicalmysticalteacher
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 09:51:58

    Real life is so different from our imaginations, isn’t it?

    Clippity-Clop

    Reply

  5. Hamish 'Managua' Gunn
    Jan 26, 2015 @ 06:34:55

    Very interesting haiku – liked a lot

    Reply

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