this old house ain’t home
fly away to paradise
doorway to real life
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Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai today.
posting poetic prose
25 Jan 2015 5 Comments
in Uncategorized Tags: death, home, life
this old house ain’t home
fly away to paradise
doorway to real life
_______
Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai today.
Jan 27, 2015 @ 07:45:04
That doorway, can we ever find it.
Jan 26, 2015 @ 13:49:20
I see so many abandoned structures on our drive between Reno and Palm Desert and they always beg to be photographed and written about…sadly, I’m always in too much of a hurry to “get there.” Nice metaphor you’ve developed here, Lynn.
Jan 26, 2015 @ 10:32:55
This is an interesting take on the image … I’d say, yes, the house is abandoned … and no home.
Jan 26, 2015 @ 09:51:58
Real life is so different from our imaginations, isn’t it?
Clippity-Clop
Jan 26, 2015 @ 06:34:55
Very interesting haiku – liked a lot