grateful

Dedicated to my “sister” friend, Joyce, who recently let go of her mother’s hands…
 
strong women’s hands

shape my life and yours:

grandmas instill faith

aunts stitch laughter

sister friends en-courage

mothers mold hearts.

even if we can no longer

touch those dear hands,

we still hear the voices

of influence cheering us

on like birdsong

in a garden of grace.
 


Invited by Marina to write poem including words important to us/we are thankful for, on the occasion of the 4th anniversary of dVerse Poets

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Brenda Davis Harsham's avatar Brenda Davis Harsham
    Jul 18, 2015 @ 06:47:44

    Beautiful. I love that birdsong in a garden of grace.

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  2. C.C.'s avatar C.C.
    Jul 16, 2015 @ 18:58:24

    Oh, those last two lines are so moving….that is exactly what it’s like, to have those voices of influence continue to ‘be there’ for us even years after they are gone!

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  3. imPerfectly Leah's avatar perfectlyleah
    Jul 16, 2015 @ 10:44:34

    I love this and it’s refreshing to see that, Faith is one of your words. Amen

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  4. narcissus101's avatar narcissus101
    Jul 16, 2015 @ 05:28:18

    Oh wow….good

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  5. Linda L. Kruschke's avatar Linda Kruschke
    Jul 15, 2015 @ 21:09:19

    Beautiful! This brought tears to my eyes. It reminded me of my sister Peggy saying to me, “It’s okay, Sweetie.” Thanks for the reminder of the important women in my life and sharing about the important ones in yours. Peace, Linda

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  6. kanzensakura's avatar kanzensakura
    Jul 15, 2015 @ 17:48:41

    The last two lines brought tears. Indeed, those precious women who have nurtured, loved, supported us…..I am who am because of these women.

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  7. graceblackink's avatar Grace Black
    Jul 15, 2015 @ 17:46:17

    How lovely. This write touched me on a personal level! Thank you for sharing.

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  8. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Jul 15, 2015 @ 17:06:36

    Beautiful poem with a great finale.

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  9. billgncs's avatar billgncs
    Jul 15, 2015 @ 13:30:12

    sounds like you have anchored your sense of self in a good place.

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  10. claudia's avatar claudia
    Jul 15, 2015 @ 13:09:56

    oh that is so true – you just reminded me of some of the women from my fam that really influenced me greatly

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