invitation…celebration

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who may come?

anyone

run as a child

wild

come humble

stumble

from shrouded night

fright

into living light

sight

come poor and needy

lovesick, greedy

come dirty and mean

be clean

hungry, thirsty, or chilled

be filled

come with your doubt

re-route

lay out your fleece

peace

the hour is near

here!

26 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. divalounger's avatar divalounger
    Aug 15, 2015 @ 16:48:19

    I loved the rhythm to this–beautiful write

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  2. Abhra Pal's avatar Abhra
    Aug 15, 2015 @ 01:06:16

    That is a heart warming invitation – you used the form well….

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  3. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella
    Aug 14, 2015 @ 22:48:53

    This is a great way to phrase an invitation!

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  4. Sumana Roy's avatar Sumana Roy
    Aug 14, 2015 @ 22:15:45

    such a feel good poem!!…a lovely read…

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  5. ManicDdaily's avatar ManicDdaily
    Aug 14, 2015 @ 21:33:41

    A really musical poem, thanks. k.

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