Taste this fog,
stir like pea soup;
thick, steamy, heady
moist air presses.
Watercolor of wet
still-life landscape,
paint no background;
grey droplets spatter.
Pickup headlights
float, pierce the misty
curtain as eery shapes
of cow ghosts appear.
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a poem in my pocket 
Apr 30, 2016 @ 04:56:49
you describe this “grey dey” so well, with scenes inside it instead of the overall image itself. i love this collection of quirky imageries.
Apr 29, 2016 @ 20:10:37
I really like the way you capture the surreal world that fog creates. And I love the cow ghosts.
Apr 29, 2016 @ 23:49:46
😄
Apr 29, 2016 @ 19:08:06
I’ve seen the cows in the fog. Driving in the country in the mist. That’s a great comparison of it to a watercolor.
Apr 29, 2016 @ 11:43:28
Really very good description of the enveloping fog. I drove through such a one once, and went very very slowly, had to!
Apr 29, 2016 @ 11:45:35
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment🙂
Apr 29, 2016 @ 10:42:34
Very real and crisp!
Apr 29, 2016 @ 10:25:31
Wonderfully artistic piece ❤ ❤
Apr 29, 2016 @ 09:01:10
Oh I love how you “see” the fog. Very artistic.
Apr 29, 2016 @ 09:09:10
Thanks for your comment, Mish!
Apr 29, 2016 @ 02:28:20
I can see a drive through a landscape, there is a stillness you can almost cut when shrouded in fog.
Apr 28, 2016 @ 22:53:22
So vivid. Wonderful descriptions here.
Apr 28, 2016 @ 21:31:10
Yep, that;s just what it’s like. This one has got to be one of my favorites of your work, Lynn.