Joining dVerse Poetics prompt: moon muse personified…
photo by lynn
One beautiful summer’s eve, Moon hosted a gala dinner party on Earth’s patio but did not invite Sun (understandably, as he always seems to outshine her best efforts and makes a point of it). The Stars, however, like to imitate Sun’s braggadocio and would have enjoyed bringing his ego down a notch. Miss Moon animated the night, elegant (as always) in her pale dress with feathery cloud shawl caressing her white shoulders. The Stars regaled their gracious host with tales of the Hunter and Great Bear. They all joined in the ancient songs, illuminating the night sky. A misty-eyed Moon finally bid farewell to the fading planets and slipped into bed just before the jilted Sun blazed hot on the horizon.
moon reflects sun’s face
heavenly bodies sing praise
shine created light
Sep 03, 2016 @ 02:38:50
Moon finally bid farewell to the fading planets
and slipped into bed just before
the jilted Sun blazed hot on the horizon
Very innovative personification of the paths taken by the heavenly bodies. Great imagery lynn!
Hank
Sep 03, 2016 @ 12:07:27
Thanks for your comment, Hank 🙂
Sep 01, 2016 @ 14:45:39
I really like this descriptive story… moon vs sun ! Diane
Sep 01, 2016 @ 15:56:31
I had fun with it😊
Sep 01, 2016 @ 14:36:00
I do love how the sun and moon would never be there at the same time… wonderful tone in this Lynn
Sep 01, 2016 @ 15:55:52
I appreciate your comment, Bjorn!
Sep 01, 2016 @ 14:02:40
Gorgeous write ❤
Sep 01, 2016 @ 14:18:40
Thanks, Sanaa ☺️
Sep 01, 2016 @ 12:40:18
A gracious hostess indeed. I enjoyed the image of the heavenly bodies mingling in the soft light.
Aug 31, 2016 @ 16:52:10
A beautiful and elegant hostess, she is the moon~ Enjoyed your share Lynn!
Aug 31, 2016 @ 16:19:09
Love this, especially:
“elegant (as always) in her pale dress with feathery cloud shawl caressing her white shoulders”
What a vivid, gorgeous image.