A “gentle scent of lavender” at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai today…
pillowed prayers’ peace
gentle scent of lavender
perfumes silent dreams
purple fields in evening praise
raise reverent cloistered blooms
posting poetic prose
07 Oct 2016 4 Comments
in tanka Tags: blooms, dreams, lavender, prayers, purple
A “gentle scent of lavender” at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai today…
pillowed prayers’ peace
gentle scent of lavender
perfumes silent dreams
purple fields in evening praise
raise reverent cloistered blooms
Oct 08, 2016 @ 23:26:08
Nice tanka Lynn__
Oct 08, 2016 @ 20:44:18
Such a pretty poem, Lynn. Thanks. k.
Oct 08, 2016 @ 10:35:20
So lovely.
Oct 08, 2016 @ 10:33:53
I could teslly feel the aromas! Thsnks fot your warm lovely comment I just saw…..very much.
Previously just mentioned if you copy/pasted a tanka ftom another source you could write yours over it, bringing the lines closer together if you wanted, though of course keeping the last two separate as you wanted. Was just a thought.
Anyway, v nice tanka.