disappointment’s questions

 

cow pushes

hard, long

granddaughters

come along

to witness birth of calf

girls interested in kittens

already few weeks old

realize something wrong

in birth canal – nose, one hoof

show but never second foot

leg bent unnaturally

cannot push out

(naturally)

must pull

stillborn

 


Unfortunately, this was our experience yesterday…linking quadrille to dVerse.

33 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 19:49:43

    Oh, how sad. Life is so fragile.

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  2. ghostmmnc's avatar ghostmmnc
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 18:33:23

    So tragic, so sorry. 😦 Writing helps process the feelings that come.

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  3. Glenn Buttkus's avatar Glenn Buttkus
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 17:48:27

    Sometimes the birth of one of my poems follows this scenario–that too can be painful to witness.

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  4. paulscribbles's avatar paul scribbles
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 17:36:44

    A big lesson about nature and, whilst painful, a lesson that in the long run deepens our understanding of the mystery.

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  5. Grace's avatar Grace
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 17:32:47

    What a sad ending ~ Stillborn gives me the shivers ~ Good one Lynn ~

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  6. Victoria Young's avatar Victoria Young
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 17:12:43

    so sad, sorry to hear!

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  7. Gina@alifelesslived's avatar Singledust
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 16:51:24

    sad when this happens but a good life lesson for young people, nature in its beauty and sadness teaches much

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  8. Adriana Citlali Ramírez's avatar Adriana Citlali Ramírez
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 16:49:54

    Oh! A difficult moment –not easy to explain to kids. I like the structure that you use to tell this story in the poem.

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  9. Frank Hubeny's avatar frankhubeny
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 16:46:50

    I hope the cow survived. Best wishes.

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  10. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo
    Apr 24, 2017 @ 16:20:33

    Oh, NO. I am so sorry. So sad for all.

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