Chèvre hosts tan renga party at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai . A tan renga is a haiku by one poet answered in 2 (7 syllable) lines by another poet.
now it reveals its hidden side
and now the other—thus it falls,
an autumn leaf © Ryokan Taigu
do leaves ever feel dizzy—
twirling in their spiral dance? lynn__
May 17, 2017 @ 19:34:38
I like the humor of your question in that 2nd stanza Lynn__
May 18, 2017 @ 06:52:32
Glad you like it
May 17, 2017 @ 15:01:48
That’s a beautiful response Lynn…for me it fits with the haiku very well 🌷🌷
May 18, 2017 @ 06:50:11
Thanks, Janice.
May 16, 2017 @ 17:54:03
The question makes me smile.
May 16, 2017 @ 21:26:26
😊